I'm only passing through...
No Me Conoces
Published on April 1, 2004 By new-age nomad In Misc
Alright, I never claimed to be a poet. I was just trying to write a counter-point article on Imajinit's psychology post, and everything that came out contradicted itself. (This doesn't mean you've won Michael.) Anywho, I promise I'll never write poetry again, but I dedicate this to anyone who's ever left a comment on my blog. Please don't be harsh, this is like the 2nd (and probably the last) poem I'll ever write.

Take nothing I say as absolute truth
About myself or my position
I'm a person without an identity
A gun with no ammunition

I appreciate your company
You've been so warm and kind
But please don't say you know me yet
I'm impossible to find

It's not that I think you'd reject me
If you found my definition
It's that I don't even know it yet;
I'm afraid I'd hate it with a passion

So if I contradict myself
Just nod your head and smile
I haven't been coherant in
Well...it's been a while

Comments
on Apr 01, 2004
I like it! Don't give up on poetry. I think most people go through a poetry phase in their life. I felt , for a while during my teens, that it was the only way I could express some of the things I was feeling. That phase of your life when you feel noone understands you including yourself. Keep exploring, learning and redefining.
on Apr 02, 2004
What a brave soul you are! I figured I would comment since you mentioned people weren't stepping up to the plate with your articles lately. I was thinking this morning what a gifted, talented writer you are. My next thought was self-centered as usual, and I was envious of your ability. You know me. I'm just about average at everything, and I only dream of writing such wonderful things. Your poetry was perfect, and I thought your response to Imaginit was respectful, yet honest. Keep writing, and know that when make it to the New York Times bestseller list, I will tell everyone I know your my "wittle" sister!
on Apr 02, 2004
I agree with Jill, keep writing, that was very nice, I liked it. My poetry phase has lasted for...oh...10 years now I think I wish I had all the poems I've written over the years, I've thrown most of them away, must've written hundreds by now
on Apr 02, 2004
Nice to read. Comforting. Refreshing after two days without a night talk and looking sadly forward at yet another.

Much love.

~Dan
on Apr 06, 2004
You may be young, my dear, but do the world a favor and become a writer. You have wisdom and insight that few best selling authors have.
on Apr 06, 2004